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Post by Psychotic Kat on Oct 25, 2004 16:26:28 GMT -5
i agree, most people think that depressing poems are easy to write and all..... it actually isnt because its the person expressing their feelings that they dont express to people by talking to them. its just a way for someone to say things without having to actually talk and sometimes its how someone vents or something. mine actually had to do with something that happened to me awhile ago and i just came to me while my friends were talkin bout something.....i wasnt really paying attention. i started another one as well, i will probably post it tomorrow or whenever i finish it.
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Post by Colloff on Oct 26, 2004 17:32:30 GMT -5
IMO all poetry is easy to write...i have no problem pulling it off...but then again most poems i turn in are half-assed...i really wonder why teachers always commend me on them...i hate em. the only poems i try on are ones i post or give to friends etc.
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Post by Titan on Nov 2, 2004 5:26:38 GMT -5
The cat Slinky Mouse Chaser Crouching behind a doorway Feline Steath Boomer (One for P. Cat) Its a Haiku if you guys didn't know.. ;D
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Post by anonomus on Nov 21, 2004 10:32:04 GMT -5
this poem is really f*cking lovie dovie and i know that to anyone eles ,but me, it is a peice of crap. i know this cuz if anyone eles read it to me i would probably throw up. but damn some people can just make ur heart melt "what love is"
when im around you i dont feel like giving up, beacause tou make me confident
when you hold me i cant help but completely let my gaurd down, beacause i feel so safe in your arms
when your eyes meet mine and you say "whats wrong?" i want to just cry and tell you
but i dont because you see me as a strong person and i dont want that to change
im afraid and dont want you to see it,
so i smile, say im fine, and pray that you believe it
when i go to say i love you it is difficult to say, beacause it meens somthing more to me now
when you yell me you think im beatiful, and i know its not just a line
when you make me laugh to the point were my sides hurt, beacause you like my smile
when i want to say something but i feel that i can't, so you try to get me to tell tou
when we kiss, my rapid heart is put on pause and i feel fireworks
when i feel completely fine around you and know ill be ok
thats when you know ur in love, beacause thats "what love is"
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Post by Colloff on Nov 22, 2004 6:42:18 GMT -5
sheer beauty. could use some grammar editing though lmfao but nice. definately duo's-corner-worthy
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Post by anonomus on Nov 24, 2004 10:50:58 GMT -5
;D thank you
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Post by my_secret_nowhere on Nov 24, 2004 21:27:41 GMT -5
A Story of Cheating Something’s wrong, out of place And it strongly shows on your face You did something wrong, something in spite Your eyes are too shiny, your skin too white Where were you at, what did you do Who were you with, where’s your right shoe Did you cause heartbreak for someone tonight Did you get caught, did you think it was right Did she scream, or yell, or curse to your face Or make you feel bad, a total disgrace I bet she made you beg, hope she made you plead I hope she turned away and made your heart bleed She tried to ignore it, tried to not see The hints you gave her, she thought not he But she was wrong and I was right She should have listened to me that night She thought you wouldn’t dare But you just didn’t care She thought you wouldn’t try But it was all a big lie
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Post by Duo on Nov 24, 2004 22:58:06 GMT -5
Well, thats very interesting... I especially like the part about the interrogation of where his shoe was... But thats definately one of those poems that makes you think....
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Post by The Archetype on Nov 25, 2004 17:09:32 GMT -5
Heh. Even I have something I made. Here.
A Fragmented tale A world without you The eyes will close Something so simple A creation born of ignorance Behind the darkness A door to the light The secret place Her voice... It's left me This time... i'll fight A world between = A forgotten world The gathering of the third enemy Nobody Who is the nobody? They are the non-exsistent The endless Thoughtless Utter silence Of the nothing That is everything
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Post by The Archetype on Nov 25, 2004 17:12:48 GMT -5
And another for your enjoyment or layughing purposes.
Maybe I wasen't to start What I began But there's no stopping it now I am how I am There's nothing more Nothing less A heart so fragile Broken already Life spread apart No sure reason Just seems I wasen't good enough to live in this It's so hard to say goodbye when goodbyes are forever
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Post by Psychotic Kat on Nov 25, 2004 20:17:00 GMT -5
hmm...here is a new one i wrote like.....2 hrs ago.
Movin' On
Don't look back Don't regret Don't be sad Or depressed Think of the good And keep on truckin' Stick it to the man And keep on workin' Forget the bad Remember the lessons Make a move To succeed Failing isn't bad It's just an obstacle Get past it and move on Just keep movin' on And don't look back
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Post by Aristotle on Nov 29, 2004 19:31:04 GMT -5
i havent posted in a while, but that was pretty good. i have decided to post on relavent topics and not get caught up in the posts. here is a free form:
why
the woman led a good life
followed the lord
never looked back
accepting the things as a power above her's
she lived her life
day by day
by spreading the word, as the existence of people slipped from her
she would save the people one day
just by being a follower
as she grew old
she sank into her web of people
who had become such a part of her
that there was nothing left of her;
never turning and seeing
that she was in a nursing home
she waited for calls
she wasted away
her bible never faded away from her however, keeping its promise
it wove the "Truth" around her
keeping together
she lied in her bed, dying
nothing was left
as she breathed her last breath \
it struck her, she had to do it,even though she knew that it was too late.
she had to ask
why
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Post by my_secret_nowhere on Dec 2, 2004 11:54:15 GMT -5
a smile that spreads a mile wide and eyes that i can look inside get lost inside your deep brown eyes and none of this i realize
you are so close, your breath i feel and if i listen, your heart i'll hear i have no worries they are not real and next to you i have no fear
one look from you and i feel weak no words left in my throat to speak you've taken my words away you see and all that's left is you and me
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Post by Aristotle on Dec 9, 2004 20:39:16 GMT -5
i am unable to ryhme; i dont know why.
oh well. heres another one. haiku.
the strong stony hills standing the wearing of time being there at morn
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Post by The Archetype on Dec 21, 2004 1:12:43 GMT -5
This is all good shit my friends good shit. Here's another. It sucks of course. I made it one depressive day in ISS(In-School Suspension)
Walk All Over Me
Why do I let you do this? Just like everyone else before Itseems I'm trapped in this memory So slow to react to this I'll just keep lettin you go by While I try to say wont hurt me I seem to cry all the time Can't handle this Seems I'm all out for you Try to make you happy bue I can't see why I can't be either Now or then It'll all be the same I'll let you do this Just like everyon before.
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